Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, March 2, 2020
My naughty story
We are involved in the get NZ writing and we are writing poems about stuff we have done that is naughty.
have been naughty before cause I have and this is not the only thing I have done.
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Kia Ora it's Tom from your school. I really liked what you have written it's really funny. I reckon you have made the poem better. next time you could try add another one if you wanted. Come comment on my blog thanks.https://marthomass.blogspot.com/
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